Monday 1 April 2019

These are my goals for my writing.

when I write i need to think more about how i can work more on my structure and language
the meaning of structure and language has 6 different levels to work on structure and language
i am not going to say them all so i'll say one of them
i can write in different ways. 

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  1. Sonny2 April 2019 at 12:38

    i like how you have capital letters and full stops

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  2. Anonymous3 April 2019 at 11:19

    kia Ora it's me Terell.On the weekends me and my friends go to the panmure wharf and we jump off the bridge into the water and then we walk up on to the bridge and then we jump off again we did a manu(Bomb) and then we went back to my friend Leon's house and then we had some food to eat. Today the whole school did a practice for lock down just because someone might came in to our school with a gun.Then I read your mahi and I wanted to asked you a question. Do you think more ideas to write in your story will enhance it so it sounds good?

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