Persuasive writing.

persuasive writing.

Today I've been learning about persuasive writing with my class persuasive writing is an argument

writing and an OREO piece of writing.

 The first top cookie is your opinion. The fillings are your reasons and your example. And the final cookie that is your second opinion and after you memorize all thos thing you start to argue.

Take a topic and if someone digresses the two of yous argue about if it is right or not that is called persuasive. 

Narrative

kia ora my name is Manu for the last week or 2 me and my class has learning how to write a narrative. I learnt how use my imagination when I'm writing. I find narrative writing interesting because it was wasn't hard but it wasn't easy. My next step is to re-read and make shore my writing makes sense. My favorite part of the story is when he runes into a corna.

The wrong camp

One day 5 boys Josh, Herb, Sovren, Dontay and Manu traveled to a camping ground. On camp they did a lot of fun things like swimming, mud fights, fishing competitions and a hike. After all thos fun things they finish off with smores and a warm fire but the fire slowly fades away so Manu gos into the woods to gather more wood for the fire.

So Manu’s chast finishing up and hears a wolf howl he says “it all good that far away” as he farts but little did he know it was not very far away from him. It was like 5 feet away from him Manu hears a foot step and assumes it was his friends but he was very wrong he spots red glowing and sharp rusty teeth he was frightened by its growl he dropped the wood like they fazed threw his arms. Manu ran like the wind as what Manu assumed what was a wolf he wasn’t sure but as he was running he looked back and seen whatever it was just standing there then walked back into the shadow. But Manu didn’t care he was out but the dark fury thingy was chasing him Manu turned left and right to scared to remember where the camp was and instead of running to the camp he ran himself into the best corner ever right were the thingy wanted him. What a dumb fala. The thing caught Manu and slowly walking into the moonlight  Manu finally seen what it was and he was right it was a wolf he said to himself “I knew it” but to frightened move it’s like his body shutdown. Manu seen the wolfs dark fur its beady eyes it smiled at him it pounst and struck going for the killer blow the wolf thought he had died it glazed down at Manu and with Manus last glaze at the wolf Manu thought that the wolf said “ooh he dead”. The bros were getting worried cause Manu wasn’t coming back to camp so they scattered across camp Dontay finds Manu laid on the floor with some sort of bite on his neck Dontay carys Manu back to the camp and screams “I found him and he’s very knocked out so come quick”. They sprint back to camp like a horde of cows they take him to the nearest hospital and put him down very carefully on a big bed. 2 days has past they thought he was a goner but Manu wakes from his deep slumber. Manu freaks out wondering where he is he bounces off the big bed Na the huge bed he sprints threw the hallway feeling like he’d just got moari bashed he spots his friends and hits the breaks and throws it in reverse. His cousins see Manu they stand with surprise they sprint at Manu like wild bulls the bros capture Manu in their arms with joy and a warm feeling in their heart. They tell Manu all about what happened at camp he was shocked by the story that they had told. From that day on they NEVER EVER EVER EVER taken anyone to a camping ground with a warning sign on the fens.

Years has past we've all have jobs Josh is a rugby coach the best in the world. Herb is a boxing coach. Sovren is a tai boxing coach and dontay is a gym coach. Manu is one of thos people that look after old people. But on Fridays Manu don’t go to work because every full moon Manu don’t feel very whale Manu looks at the moon and transforms. He would lose control of himself he’d long nails his eyes will change his teeth will sharpen his arms and legs will grow longer he’d transform into a frightening werewolf. Every Friday he’ll go back to the place where this all started the wrong camp and he’ll always remember pieces of his night he’d always remember who waiting just lurking in the shadow the 1 who made Manu like this. The bark fury wolf and he looks out for Manu watching over Manu making sure he doesn't get into trouble Manu’s learning the way of the wild.

Haiku poems

Sorry for putting this up late.

Last week we were learning to do a haiku poem. A haiku poem is a natural & a feeling poem. The rules for a haiku poem is 3 lines the first line must have 5 word 5 word only. & the second line should have 7 words 7 only & the last line has 5 words only 5. And that is a haiku poem.

if i mist any tell me in the comment.

once again sorry for uploading so late.

This week NRC has been learning about paper fraction we were doubling by doubling i mean cutting the paper in to little square tool we couldn't cut any smaller.

These are my goals for my writing.

when I write i need to think more about how i can work more on my structure and language

the meaning of structure and language has 6 different levels to work on structure and language

i am not going to say them all so i'll say one of them

i can write in different ways. 

asking questions.

This week ropu 2 has been learning how to ask questions before r, well r, after r,. We been asking questions for a while and still no answers so our teacher has been shown us two ways to find those answers. But we have only found one answer to our questions it mite be one answer but that is a stat to our quest for answer.

ideas

read the texted and try find clues for your question.

google 

google your questions for answers.

Miri and RARU

They say that you can never have a monster as friend but this story says something different enjoy

There was a girl name Miri who love to draw but her teacher disproved mires teacher miss Latka wants Miri to learn but Miri just wants to draw all the time because she thinks work is boring so that is why she draws but one day she drew a monster eating her teacher but then miss Latka caught her and the hole class laughed and Miri got really embarrass and miss Latka gives Miri home work and when school finished the hole class mocked her so Miri went home and ribbed up her home work and drew some more then went to bed.

Then the next morning miris drawing came to life at first miri was confused then she realized it was her drawing and then she comedown and played with her drawing she him raru miri toke raru for a breakfast and raru did not eat the breakfast so he ate the table so miri got scared that mum would call animal petrol and then they would take raru away so she toke raru to school with her and put raru in to her bag.

Meanwhile in Miri bag Raru is eating Miri school work then Miri walks pass a class member and raru grows at the class member and the boy grabs Miri bag and then he see raru and tells miss Latka and she calls pet pi-troll and they toke Raru away and got really sad that they toke raru away from miri raru was the only true friend of Miri but no matter what happens they would always be the bestest of friend and nothing can change that

Meanwhile miss latka has her own friend his name is GNIEW he is like raru but bigger,orange and spikier and miss Latka and GNIEW have some thing in common they both love cake.

This story was written for a reason this book is trying to tell you that you get a friend no matter what.

I hope you enjoyed.